Many people argue that eating junk food has led to an unhealthy lifestyle. This problem has become more common among young people these days. Do you agree or disagree that junk food is the cause of the issue?

In the present situation,

junk

food became part of our life due to our busy lifestyles.

This

phenomenon is exerting adverse impacts not only

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individuals but

also

the youngsters. I strongly agree that fast

foods

are the culprit of exacerbating

children

's health. At the outset, it is undeniable the fact that

junk

foods

contain a huge amount of sugar, which is highly dangerous to

children

if they excess intaking them. According to the ministry of health, chronic diseases

such

as

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diabetes

diabeties

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diabetes

stems from having

high

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level of sugar

,

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and

also

can increase the possibility to get heart

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attacks

attacts

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attacks

and

raising

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blood pressure.

Thus

, it is safe to say that

children

's health problems are mainly affected by the overwhelming sugar

intakes

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which

springs

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from eating

junk

foods

.

This

is the

second

reason why I am convinced that having unhealthy

foods

as a staple diet brings about severe problems

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the young generations. There is no doubt that in the contemporary world,

the

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obesity

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among

amoung

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among

youths

are

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skyrocketing compared to the past.

A research

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conducted by the U.S government presents that

children

who are having

junk

foods

rather

then

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healthy home-made meals have increased by 8% and along with that

at

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the same year,

obesity

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rate

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among

amoung

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among

youngsters has raised up to 38% over the past few decades.

Therefore

, they have concluded that there is a strong connection between the type of diet they take and the increasing obesity level. In conclusion, there is no doubt that the young generation's unhealthy lifestyle has a strong link with the

junk

diet

which

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they are highly exposed

in

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their daily lives. I strongly believe that it is by no means unsurmountable if their parents and the governments take

actions

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immediately.