You bought a football match ticket. However, you are unable to go. So you want to offer the ticket to your friend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: explain the football tournament why you are unable to go how can your friend get the ticket

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Dear John, How are you and Angela? It has been a long time since we met. We must plan something very soon, maybe

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month. Anyways, I am writing to check if you are available on September 20th. As a matter of fact, I bought a football match ticket

last

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month between Liverpool and Real Madrid. It is the Champions League final and I must say

this

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will be an incredible game. To give you more information, the UEFA Champions League is an annual club football competition organised by the Union of European Football Associations and contested by top-division European clubs. Unfortunately, I cannot travel to Spain to watch

this

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final as yesterday I got to know that I have to visit France

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week for an urgent business meeting. I thought I would be able to make it but no one is available to fill my gap. If you are interested in the game

then

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I can send you the ticket via speed post and will reach you in 2 business days. Warm regards, Ishant Kesar

Submitted by ishantkesar on Wed Sep 21 2022

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

177 words

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You bought a football match ticket. However, you are unable to go. So you want to offer the ticket to your friend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: explain the football tournament why you are unable to go how can your friend get the ticket

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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In some part of the world, women are not allowed to vote. What is your opinion about this ?

You have just won two tickets to a concert and want to invite your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter ● give details about the concert ● describe how you won the tickets ● explain why you’ve chosen your friend to go with you