The increase in People’s life expectancy means that they have to work older to pay for their retirement. One alternative is that people start to work at a young age. Is this alternative a positive or a negative development?

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Hello Mr. Amir We would like to work with your team regarding payment instrument for the Granular Sulphur deal. Your bank should accept 2 transferable SBLC from the buyer and redirect to the supplier's bank once for 1 year contract. The payment will be done from our side after reaching the commodity to the port of destination. We can set up a Sale Agreement and NCNDA with CICS Energy. Let me give some basic details

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: Origin of the Sulphur: OmanPort of destination: TanzaniaSBLC Total costs1. 32500.000$ 2. 16.250.000$ Monthly Supply: 150.000 tCommission for CICS Energy: 1,5$/T each month. If you agree on that terms, we can proceed

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. I will send you more details about all parties. Latest on Monday, our bank will send you the Draft of SBLC.

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The increase in People’s life expectancy means that they have to work older to pay for their retirement. One alternative is that people start to work at a young age. Is this alternative a positive or a negative development?

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One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Fewer young people play sports these days. why is this? what can be done to encourage more young people to do sports?

It is difficult for people who live in cities to get enough physical exercise. What causes and solutions can be taken to solve the problem?

Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologies describe what action you will take

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about history of the houses or building they live in. what are the reasons for this?? how can people research this??