The increase in People’s life expectancy means that they have to work older to pay for their retirement. One alternative is that people start to work at a young age. Is this alternative a positive or a negative development?

Hello Mr. Amir  We would like to work with your team regarding payment instrument for the Granular Sulphur deal. Your bank should accept 2 transferable SBLC from the buyer and redirect to the supplier's bank once for 1 year contract. The payment will be done from our side after reaching the commodity to the port of destination. We can set up a Sale Agreement and NCNDA with CICS Energy. Let me give some basic details
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:  Origin of the Sulphur: OmanPort of destination: TanzaniaSBLC Total costs1. 32500.000$ 2. 16.250.000$ Monthly Supply: 150.000 tCommission for CICS Energy: 1,5$/T each month. If you agree on that terms, we can proceed
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. I will send you more details about all parties. Latest on Monday, our bank will send you the Draft of SBLC.
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