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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

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Learning local
languages
 is always seen as less important than
English
 learning at school. Many believe that these are at risk of dying out because these
languages
 are not being taught. I think that focusing on
English
 is more important because what is the use of learning a lot of
languages
 if we already translated everything into
English
?
That is
 what I will be talking about in
this
 essay.
To begin
 with, learning local
languages
 is important because we can
then
 understand history.
However
, if we translated everything into
English
 there is no use in learning any other
language
.
For example
, if everybody in the world can talk in
English
then
 we can communicate really easy and everyone understands everything
then
 life is going to be a lot easier and
instead
 of focusing on learning a new
language
 you can focus on your dreams, goals and things that are much more important
then
 wasting your time learning a new
language
.
Furthermore
, learning a new
language
 is
also
 really important because in the real world not everyone knows how to speak
English
 and there are more than 6,500
languages
 in the world right now.
Moreover
, we should not try too much to ensure the survival of local
languages
 because at the end of the day it is better to have fewer
languages
 so we can meet and talk easier with other people. In conclusion, learning
English
 is much more important than trying to ensure the living of other local
languages
. I believe that improving the learning of
English
 is the right answer because everything is already in
English
 we are only left to teach
English
 ,especially in schools.
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