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Plastic bags are used widely and cause many environmental problems. Some people say they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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poly
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one of the important recourse and solve the
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surrounding
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surrounding
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however
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 the majority of
people
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 claim that
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carrier
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 should be prohibited. From my point of
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 way is more significant and in
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 I will discuss these two viewpoints in a depth. On the one hand
plastic
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 are popular because of their low cost and comfortable to hold and
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bags
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using
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 almost all over the world. Individuals started
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use
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 it
,
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because carrier
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 are available everywhere.
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the
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 number of
people
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are not agree
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 with
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 because there is more
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damage
 rather than benefits.
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example
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 after using
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bags
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people
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use
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 to throw
it
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 everywhere. By the
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enlarging
inlarging
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 the size of garbage humans started to catch away
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to
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 oceans and in
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way
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effects
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to
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the
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nature too. In
fact
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 by the year the 19
procents
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per cent
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 of ocean fishes are
killing
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 by the pollution of water.
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most individuals
wants
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 to
use
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usual
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 or paper
bags
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, because they are
more
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preferable and
people
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able
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 to
use
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it
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them
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 a lot.
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 the industrialization of our
world
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 the economy chose to
use
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 the usual
plastic
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bags
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 as a cheap way of big income and
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 why we prefer to execute poly
bags
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 but if we will change our
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choice
choise
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choice
 suddenly by
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using paper or grid
bags
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, it could change almost everything in pollution line. In conclusion, during the
use
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 and wraps of
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bags
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, we must
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 think about dying animals in the sea, and of course about
alife
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life
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 nature too.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Decompose
  • Biodegradable
  • Landfill
  • Eco-friendly
  • Sustainability
  • Environmental footprint
  • Wildlife conservation
  • Non-renewable resources
  • Mandate
  • Incentives
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