Plastic shopping bags are used widely and cause many environmental problems. Some people say they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

It is argued that

plastic

shopping packets

has

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been

utilizing

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popularly all over the world which is

effecting

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affecting

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badly to the natural environment

.

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badly.

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A bunch of individuals think that using these ought to

forbid

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be forbidden

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. I completely agree with

this

view and think that they should

to

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stop using shopping

bags

in order to avoid

the

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environmental problems. First of all,

to ban using

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banning the use of

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plastic

packets is beneficial

to keep

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for keeping

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tidy and clean the nature. If humans reduce the amount of

using

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apply

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plastic

packages

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packaging

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after

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apply

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it would help to mitigate the major problems which is

making

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causing

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some

troubles

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for the environment. Take an example, over a decade

utilizing

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of utilizing

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and

thrown

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throwing

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away

the

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apply

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plastic

bags

amount has

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increase

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increased

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and

this

state

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has cause

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cause

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to die out the ecosystem.

Thus

, using

the

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apply

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shopping paper

bags

is

completely

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worthwhile option to save the natural flora and fauna

instead

of utilizing

plastic

bags

. Second

of

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all

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apply

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, another benefit to

outlaw using

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outlawing the use of

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plastic

packages is that

this

system of government might

to

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prevent lots of difficult

situation

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situations

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which is influencing negatively for both terrestrial

habitat

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habitats

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and marine life.

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,

with

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in

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this

way

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we may be able to save

the

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terrestrial and marine animals and

plants

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life. For instance, in the USA schools and universities

had

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installed

“natural

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a “natural

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environment” programme which

focus

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focuses

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on

animals

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animal

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habitants

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habitats

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,

as a result

of

this

system they

has

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been saving too many rare

animals

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animals'

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life.

That is

way

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why

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,

government

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the government

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should set up these types of

index

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and programmes not only

to

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for

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educational facilities but

also

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for

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community places for people

care

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about the ecosystem. To recapitulate, I strongly believe that

halt

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to utilizing the sale packets

is

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brings far more boons

,

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because it makes the environment spic and span and

help

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helps

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to avoid

from

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apply

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troubles.