Several people assert that the main cause of crime is an economically disadvantaged background. However, others say that crime is caused by a person's nature. Discuss both ideas and give your own opinion

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Some

people

believe that the main cause of

crime

is poverty while others think that a person's nature results in a

crime

This

essay will discuss both views and shows my personal ideas. There are several reasons why

crime

is caused by an economically disadvantaged background. The

first

thing is that

people

without

money

will hardly keep their lives. If

people

do not have enough

money

, they will not maintain a standard life, which means they have no place to live and even can not feed themselves.

Therefore

, they will use various methods to get

money

, which include illegal ways.

Secondly

people

can get rid of pressure, if they have

money

. When

people

have enough

money

, they could buy anything that they like.

For instance

, many

people

would go shopping when they feel sad or depressed because they can release these negative emotions due to shopping.

Hence

, they will be more joyful, and they have a lower motivation to

crimes

Nevertheless

, a person's nature

also

plays a significant role in the

crime

. Some criminals' personalities lead them to commit

crimes

, and they did not commit

crimes

for

money

or anything else.

For example

, we can see a number of killers, they do not have arguments or hatred for victims, which means they only kill

people

for fun.

Also

, there are some criminals that have a bad childhood or are even abused by classmates. When they grew up, they are more likely to hate society and commit

crimes

for revenge. In conclusion, I agree that both an economically disadvantaged background and a person's nature are the essential causes of

crime

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