More and more serious crimes seem to be committed each year. Some think that the death penalty is the best way to deal with this problem while other people think different measures are more likely to be successful. Discuss both options.

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notion,is there are bountiful judicious who argue that judicial murder has proved the best punishment in order to control these tremendous acts .

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these measures will lend an air of threat to lawbreakers,

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decreasing illegal acts.

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,according to a recent demonstration held by Oxford university emerged that the least offence percentage was noticed in Islamic countries because they issued the death warrant to the killer and not accepting any other way .As a ,result these merits stand in good stead as far as,augmenting the chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.

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,another imperative pivotal factor according to the aforementioned proposition is that it is unlikely to help one thrive and excel in various ways.

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individuals argue that consider other ways like quarantine for some years and submission of penal because every culprit should get a

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chance to cultivate their mistakes .

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, there is a need to add information about human rights in social books at schools in order to teach our offspring, and

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get a crime-free environment.Grace to the other benefits it provides,not only one when it comes to being effective but

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it is helpful for the rest of life. In a nutshell,according to the aforenamed wrangles,it is proved that, if the government issued

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for murders,the crime rate would get better but

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other factors cannot be ignored.