Plastic bags are use widely and cause many environmental problems. Some people say they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today’s modern life the ecological crisis in which humanity is barely surviving has become a major concern.

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a part of the population believes that a measure to reduce

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crisis is to prohibit

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shopping

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I completely agree with

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statement, I believe that there are other ways to improve

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we have only one planet to live on and we must protect it. We don’t only keep safe the planet, we look after everything on it water, animals, nature and many other things. Some people just throw away the elastic to nature causing harm not only, in the sight but

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the animals and plants. Most of the earth’s surface is covered with water and when it’s windy,

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bags

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fly into the water and harm aquatic animals

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banning these

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is vital to their survival.

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from my perspective and experience banning

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is a temporary and necessary solution. It does not indicate the ecological dead end we live in

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, with the support of

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out to informed that prevention of the greenhouse effect and deforestation are among the main problems.

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with these actions and the ban

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environmental

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problems will be reduced. In a

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we live on a destroyed planet, even if it is beyond our power to change it. The

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of

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bags

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a targeted education about the environment will soon prevent the detriment future of our kind.