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Some cities have vehicle free days when private cars,trucks and motorcycle are banned from the city center. People are encouraged to use public transportation such as buses , taxes and metro on vehicle-free days. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays ,
Pollution
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 is increasing day by day because of transportation in the
city
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 centre. So the government is bringing some policies where citizens are encouraged to use public
transport
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instead
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 of private , considering it as a vehicle-free day. Despite some disadvantages ,
this
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 policy has so many advantages which will be discussed in
further
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 paragraphs with a suitable conclusion. Initiating with the benefits for the same,
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 and the foremost key benefit is, It helps in reducing
pollution
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 in the
city
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 centre, which is the most polluted area in every
city
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 .
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 , most of the factories or offices are located in the
city
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 centres where
people
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 travel daily for their job by car or any other means and due to ,that it increases air
pollution
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 and noise
pollution
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 . Encouraging citizens to use public
transport
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 for a few
days
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 in a month will definitely help in improving air quality.
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 , travelling by public
transport
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 is cheaper than travelling by private vehicle and
as a
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result
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people
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 will save money .
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 , it will
also
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 help in reducing parking issues in dense areas and there will be less chance of accidents .
On the other hand
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, there are some disadvantages as well,
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 , public
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 will be overburdened these
days
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 as everyone will depend on that.
Secondly
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, There will be more chances of getting late as public
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 will be overpopulated and it will increase pressure on the public to leave home early to reach their workplace on time.
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, If someone takes 30 minutes time to reach the office but now they have to leave at least 1 hour early , which is too much for some folks . To sum up,
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 using public
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 on specific
days
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 makes
people
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 annoyed sometimes It helps in reducing
pollution
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 and gives time to nature to heal itself . I believe , every
city
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 or town should have a policy for vehicle-free
days
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 where
people
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 should be encouraged to use public
transport
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 and should come out of their comfort zone .

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • vehicle-free days
  • private cars
  • public transportation
  • buses
  • trucks
  • motorcycles
  • metro
  • pollution
  • air quality
  • traffic congestion
  • commuting habits
  • physical activity
  • health benefits
  • economic benefits
  • community interaction
  • public resistance
  • implementation challenges
  • coordination
  • city authorities
  • logistics
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