In some areas of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. what is your opinion about this?

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It is often argued that in some areas

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are not permitted to stay out of their home at

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unless they are with adults. I completely agree with

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safety of them.

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, nowadays the crime rate is increasing rapidly and most of them happen at

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, teens do not have the ability to interact with dangerous situations because of their lack of experience in life. ,

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they have a pure heart which can not deal with crucial issues which happened and they maybe underestimate situations wrongly.

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, a lot of magazines publish that, teens are getting confused when they face a new situation.

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why I believe that teenagers must be prohibited to stay out of their homes at

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without adults.

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, in some places, wildlife animals are often observed for their food in live hood. Most of the time they hunt at

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so if adolescents are alone, the risk will get higher.

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, wild animals are reported in some inhabited places searching for their prey and killing pets.

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some people were attacked when they are alone.

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, parents should not let their offspring go outside alone and make sure they are safe from predators. To conclude, it is not safe for youngsters to spend nights away from home. I totally agree with imposing a curfew for youngsters as it is an effective way of saving and protecting them from disturbing both humans and wildlife by going outside with adults at

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In some areas of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. what is your opinion about this?

Students at schools and the university learn far more from lessons with the teachers than from other source (such as internet and television). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is important to give children the chance to act independently and make their own decisions from early age. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this idea?

in some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building their living. what are the reasons for this? how can people research this?