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Compare and contrast electronic media with print media.

#contrast #media #print
Today, the
news
 is serving as an essential part of our day-to-day life.
News
, whether in electronic or in printed form has become a necessity in
this
 era. In my opinion, both electronic
media
 and
print
media
 have their own merits and demerits.
To begin
 with,the most contrasting feature that differentiates the two
media
 is their mode of telecasting. As most people know, electronic
media
 utilizes studios and cameras to broadcast the report whereas
print
 publishing requires paper and printing machines for reporting. Electronic
news
 performs live telecasts
for instance
 ABP
news
 which is not the technique used by
print
media
. In fact, it provides the customer with a photograph of the incident. One
such
 example of
this
 is The Times of India. Another point to be considered is, in the
news
 operated by the electronic medium, there is an anchor who informs the onlookers about current affairs. On the flip side, in
print
news
, a writer writes blogs to depict events. Along with that, the electronic broadcast reporting approach
also
 involves interviews where the popular celebrities are questioned face-to-face by the reporters in front of cameras.
Additionally
, it presents to its viewers, recordings of discussions inside the courtrooms or the ministry offices. newspaper,
conversely
, reviews
such
 discussions and interviews in written form to its readers including every precise detail.
Furthermore
,
print
media
 targets an audience who can read effectively.
On the contrary
, an individual habituated to watching the incidents should opt for the electronically reported account. To summarize, the primary purpose of both types of publishing is to spread awareness and while doing so, they should not include personal views.
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