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Band 8

PART 1: You read an article in a magazine about your hometown and some of the information was wrong. Write to the editor to correct the article and tell him how unhappy you are.

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Dear sir or Madam, Good morning, I hope you are doing well. I am writing to you to inform you about some wrong information that you wrote in the Monthly magazine on 13 Sep about my
city
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Dammam
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.
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 of all your article is my favourite and I have membership in
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 magazine. I noticed three wrong points in your article
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,
Dammam
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 is not the big
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 in Saudia Arabia the big
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 is Riyadh.
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, It has the tallest beach in the world ,not the
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 tallest. And the
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 point is
Dammam
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 contains a diversity of people not only eastern people. I encourage you to read more about my home town. And I can send you a book that has a lot of information and details about my
city
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 not only
Dammam
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 but other big cities of Saudia Arabia it is called the green book or you can find it at king Fahad bookstore. I hope you accept my notice and you have apologised in your
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 article. Faithfully, Saud

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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