In many parts of the world, there is continuous coverage of sport on television. Some people believe this discourages the young from taking part in any sport themselves. Discuss this view and give your own opinion. You should write at least 250 words.

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essay will be discussed the statement that the non-stop broadcast of
sports
on television
dismotivates
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demotivates
/demotivates the new generation to participate in playing themselves and at the end, I will add my personal view on the topic
that is
the opposite. In many parts of the world watching television is one of the most common ways of entertainment, especially gathering with friends for a special match of any sport
that is
considered
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an
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important to fans.
However
, it might be becoming a very controversial way of looking at
sports
-something to watch, not to play. Some believe that it is due to laziness and boredom.
For instance
, my grandpa watches tennis matches daily,
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he does not know even how to play it in the
first
place.
Moreover
, I have a different view. My contrasting opinion is that especially young people about young generation get even more motivated by the
sports
channels because they get used to that sport a lot and it becomes as a passion
being
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a part of it.
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,
is
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my ex-boyfriend
who
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loves various types of
sports
. Some of them are
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traditional soccer and tennis. He could not miss a match thereby that started
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which started an obsession for him
practicing
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and playing with friends the same
sports
he watches every day. The
second
reason is the advertisement of famous players to the teenage public
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audience who is a lot more influenced by
the
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social
medias
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media and new trends. What I mean is that if a boy has a role model
such
as Lebron James or Messi, we would want to become as successful as
this
highly-paid sportiest. Another example is my little cousin who was a big fan of Christiano Ronaldo. His parents bought him t-shirts and other presents with Ronaldo’s face on, thereby he started going to soccer practices and hasn’t
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has not stopped for six years. To conclude,/In conclusion
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To sum up the continuous coverage of sport on TV leads to
lazzines
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laziness
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laziness towards being active. Alternatively, my way of thinking/ I
consider
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my personal view
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that
is that
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it has an opposite effect on kids and encourages them even more.
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