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In many parts of the world, there is continuous coverage of sport on television. Some people believe this discourages the young from taking part in any sport themselves. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

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 on television
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demotivates
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 the opposite. In many parts of the world watching television is one of the most common ways of entertainment, especially gathering with friends for a special match of any sport
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important to fans.
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, it might be becoming a very controversial way of looking at
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-something to watch, not to play. Some believe that it is due to laziness and boredom.
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, my grandpa watches tennis matches daily,
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 he does not know even how to play it in the
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, I have a different view. My contrasting opinion is that especially young people about young generation get even more motivated by the
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 channels because they get used to that sport a lot and it becomes as a passion
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my ex-boyfriend
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loves various types of
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. Some of them are
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traditional soccer and tennis. He could not miss a match thereby that started
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which started an obsession for him
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 and playing with friends the same
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 he watches every day. The
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audience who is a lot more influenced by
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social
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media and new trends. What I mean is that if a boy has a role model
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 as Lebron James or Messi, we would want to become as successful as
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 highly-paid sportiest. Another example is my little cousin who was a big fan of Christiano Ronaldo. His parents bought him t-shirts and other presents with Ronaldo’s face on, thereby he started going to soccer practices and hasn’t
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has not stopped for six years. To conclude,/In conclusion
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To sum up the continuous coverage of sport on TV leads to
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laziness
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laziness towards being active. Alternatively, my way of thinking/ I
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my personal view
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it has an opposite effect on kids and encourages them even more.
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