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Some people believe that the best way to improve the general well-being of schoolchildren is to make physical education compulsory in all schools. Others, however, think this world have little effect on overall health and that other measures are needed. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, it is widely argued that having physical
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classes
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 forcibly in all schools is the best option for the general well-being of schoolchildren.
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, some people say that
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 impact on healthy life and the policy should be replaced
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 one. I will compare both opinions in
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 essay. Implementing the P.E. class compulsory has the advantage that
children
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 can have time to concentrate on doing sports. Because of the widespread of digital devices,
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, computers, smartphones, and video games, modern
children
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 do not have plenty of time for the daily exercises that are indispensable for appropriate growth. Doing sports constantly in
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 will solve
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 trouble.
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, the importance of cooperation that students can learn from P.E.
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 which leads to making better relationships with friends, may contribute to
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 of the daily life.
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, physical
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classes
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 may be too short to gain enough time for exercise for
children
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.
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,
children
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 who are not good at playing sports may feel the P.E.
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 as a burden
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 their school life, and it would be the opposite to their well-being. Teaching the value of enough daily exercises and crucial customs,
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, having nutritious meals and going to bed earlier, in
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another class to encourage the student’s consciousness of the overall health may be the better way to improving the general well-being of schoolchildren. To conclude,
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 doing physical
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 in all schools compulsory has both advantages and disadvantages, I believe that compulsory physical
education
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 in schools is meaningless because the drawbacks of
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 outweigh the strong points.
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, I suppose that another policy
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 as teaching the importance of healthy customs in different
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 will be more helpful for
children
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’s well-being.
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