The maps below show the changes in the art gallery ground floor in 2015 and present day

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There are some changes in the art

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gallery

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ground floor in 2015 and the present day, but some of the rooms are still the same. The entrance, the

Exhibition

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Room

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1/2/3 hasn’t changed and it remains even now. Standing at the entrance, on the left

side

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you can see that

exhibition

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room

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4 has been separated into 2 rooms, from

exhibition

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room

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4 to the Children’s area and Temporary

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. The

Gallery

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Office used to be next to

exhibition

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room

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4 but now it’s just an empty space with a vending machine. There was a receptionist next to the

gallery

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office but now they have moved it

side

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side

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the

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fucking Temporary

Exhibition

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room

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(what a fucking idiot). The

gallery

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shop was a café

room

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back

then

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, they changed it and made it smaller than before. The stairs were moved to the right

side

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and they built a lift next to the stairs and

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

158 words

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The maps below show the changes in the art gallery ground floor in 2015 and present day

At present times, the population of some countries include a relative number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantage outweigh the disadvantages?

ich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The main purpose of advertising is to increase sales. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many parents today organise extra classes for their children after school and at the weekends. Do you feel that this is a worthwhile thing to do or do you feel children have enough education at school?

In the future, all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?