The maps below show the changes in the art gallery ground floor in 2015 and present day

The maps below show the changes in the art gallery ground floor in 2015 and present day
There are some changes in the art
gallery
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gallery's
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ground floor in 2015 and the present day, but some of the rooms are still the same. The entrance, the
Exhibition
Room
1/2/3 hasn’t changed and it remains even now. Standing at the entrance, on the left
side
you can see that
exhibition
room
4 has been separated into 2 rooms, from
exhibition
room
4 to the Children’s area and Temporary
Exhibition
. The
Gallery
Office used to be next to
exhibition
room
4 but now it’s just an empty space with a vending machine. There was a receptionist next to the
gallery
office but now they have moved it
side
by
side
the
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fucking Temporary
Exhibition
room
(what a fucking idiot). The
gallery
shop was a café
room
back
then
, they changed it and made it smaller than before. The stairs were moved to the right
side
and they built a lift next to the stairs and
exhibition
room
3.
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