These days some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting or events. Do you think this is positive or negative development
It seems that the verb forget does not agree with the subject. Consider changing the verb form.
It seems that high profile is missing a hyphen. Consider adding the hyphen(s).
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.