Everyone should stay at school until 18. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people think that all

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should stay at

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until the

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of

eighteen

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.

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staying at

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until adulthood can produce a

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benefits

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, I personally disagree with

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for a

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of reasons, which will be outlined in

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essay. On the one hand, the

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that

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should continue to study at

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until the

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of

eighteen

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does have a

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of benefits.

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, most young people under the

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of

eighteen

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have very little real-world experience and have very little

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of what career they will pursue, and

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staying at

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until the

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of

eighteen

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will allow them

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opportunity to develop their education and time to decide upon a suitable career path.

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, forcing

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to stay at

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until the

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of

eighteen

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will create a more educated future generation of people which may help to reduce some social and unemployment problems.

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a

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of drawbacks that

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idea

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may bring with it.

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, many

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these days do not

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with the current education system and forcing them to participate in

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can cause many problems.

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, these kinds of students are usually very disruptive in a classroom and

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affects other students who are trying to learn.

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to

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, many

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choose to follow careers that do not require them to continue studying in

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past the

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of sixteen.

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, for those who wish to pursue a career that requires more

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learning,

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as a qualified builder, electrician or machinery operator, it is quite unnecessary to remain at

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until the

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of

eighteen

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. In conclusion,

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there would be a

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of positive effects from

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remaining at

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until a later

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, I personally feel that the drawbacks outweigh the benefits mentioned above.