In some countries, fast food restaurants and supermarkets give money to school to promote their products. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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and market outlets pay the schools to promote their products. It has some benefits and some negative effects but overall, I think that it has more disadvantages as compared to the advantages. The main positive impact it has on schools is that it provides monetary help to the education department.

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used on deserving

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as scholarships, which are provided to certain

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and could relieve the financial burden

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poor families.

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, the outlets sometimes provide manufactured articles to the schools, free of cost.

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could save up the money used in canteens, as

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is provided for free, and

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saved cost can be used for extra-curricular activities.

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, new game courts could be built and supplies for festivals could be provided. The promotion of fast

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has two major negative effects on the life of high-school

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, they promote a high carbohydrate and sugary diet which could lead to obesity.

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causes a multitude of diseases which include diabetes, dental decay, blood pressure and organ damage.

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, there is a higher chance of type 2 diabetes occurring in obese people.

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, children can get addicted to junk

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, which is expensive and most families would not be able to afford to eat out every day.

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causes financial stress on families and

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.

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stress can cause poor academic performance. In conclusion, I would like to say that the sponsorship from different fast-

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outlets has both advantages and disadvantages for the institute but, in my opinion, it has a disastrous effect on the health and the pocket of the child and their parents.