You and a couple of your colleagues would like to participate in a work-related seminar. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for • detailed information regarding the dates • program schedule • Enquire about cost and possible discounts for groups

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Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing

this

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letter with regard to the seminar that will be organized in the

first

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quarter of

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year. I and my team are very keen on collaborating with that workshop. It would be so grateful if you could send us the detailed agenda regarding the timeframe when the workshop is scheduled so that we could give heads-up to our department head and plan our travel

accordingly

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In addition

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to that, we would like to get a detailed plan and a list of topics that will be covered at

this

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summit. We

also

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heard that there is a cost associated with

this

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summit,

however

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, we would like to know the exact price for joining,

moreover

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, we would like to check if there

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any concessions for group participation. I am looking forward to your response. Yours sincerely, Vivek Vijayakumar

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

145 words

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