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Environmental problems such as pollution and climate variations are increasing now a days. The governments have taken some steps at global level but they got only few solution. Why is it so? How can this problem be solved.

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Most environmental issues
such
 as climate variation and pollution have existed since the
first
 industrial revolution, and the planet is already getting worse day after day since the revolution.
Moreover
, nowadays governments still looking for the most effective
solution
 even though they already got a few solutions which could be due to these strategies are not that effective as they use to be before.
Thus
, the below paragraph will specifically discuss several reasons cause
solution
 can't be found and provide a way to solve
this
 issue.
To begin
 with, There are a few things that government need to be considering before the method is proposed, which are money and the effectiveness of the
solution
. To be more specific, the government need to ensure the cost of the
solution
 won't be over the budget they got as well as the effectiveness and stability of the
solution
 would be through a deeper investigation in different aspects.
For example
, the current circumstances of climate change and pollution around the world.
Therefore
, there is no doubt that the process of building up the
solution
 will need to take a long period of time when it has that many aspects to consider with.
On the other hand
, taking some steps at the global level will
also
 become a challenge that governments need to deal with as they need to ensure every
country
 got the same opinion and goal. Which is all depends on how close and deep is the relationship between countries. That
solution
 can't be operating effectively if everyone has different ideas and goals. To conclude, the only
solution
 that can be thought of is to find out the
solution
 as a global team
instead
 of
country
, each
country
 will need to provide current circumstances in their
country
 and
then
 figure out the
solution
that is
 beneficial and works for everyone.
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