The charts below show information about the participants in the Olympics from 1924 to 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts demonstrated the quantity of
the
participants who took part in the Olympics from 1924 to 2014. Correct article usage
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Overall
, the number of athletes entering the Olympics increased considerably since it began. Linking Words
In addition
, there were always more men than women, Linking Words
however
, the gap narrowed significantly as the Linking Words
numbers
of female participants throughout the years.
To be specific, there were few women taking part in the game, yet in 1954, the bar of women athletes rose from 100 to 500. Fix the agreement mistake
number
Then
it stood at around 1800 in 1984 and Linking Words
then
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skyrocketing
to nearly 5000 in 2014. Wrong verb form
skyrocketed
On the contrary
, the figure Linking Words
of
males was much higher, at 3000 in the first year and continued to increase, reaching Change preposition
for
the
peak of nearly 6000 Correct article usage
a
at
2014.
In Change preposition
in
term
of Fix the agreement mistake
terms
line
graph, approximately 3500 people participated in the first Olympics. Add an article
a line
the line
This
number experienced a steady rise to around 6500 in 1984. The most dramatic increase occurred between 1984 and 2014 when it climbed by 5500, ending at less than 11500.Linking Words
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