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A recent study showed people in developed countries are not as happy as they were before development. What are the causes of this and what are some possible solutions?

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In the contemporary world , studies reveal that the
people
 of the developed nations are not much-satisfied compared to the past when they were in the developing stage . Well, there are numerous reasons which create
this
 problem like expenses, cut-throat competition and inflation .
This
 essay will
further
 discuss the causes and later provide
a viable solutions
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a viable solution
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.
To begin
 with , the
people
 living in strong economies country they mainly pay huge taxes. In developed countries the infrastructure maintained by the government income and the authority collected from
a
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different forms of taxes, each product an individual has surcharges ,
this
 will make frustrated and the burden will create
also
.
Moreover
 ,
people
 spend most of their time
to cope up
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coping
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 with their daily requirements as well as expenses and that lead to
the
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no time for family and happiness . Statics have proven that in developed ,countries 7 out of 10
people
 are suffering from stress due to finances.
Although
this
 issue is challenging , the government can solve
this
 matter by providing better education and job opportunities. If ample vacancies are available , he will
able
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 to earn more money to support his family and needs .
For example
, many
people
 work in different highly paid jobs
such
 as a doctor , engineers and builders, these employers can live a better life with their families . In conclusion , developed countries have a strong economy and maintain the infrastructure which affects the
people
 living who pay taxes in different forms due to
this
people
 are suffering from stress and it
also
 affects family life as well .
In
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As
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such
 ,situation solution could be education and work opportunities , which will keep
them
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their
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joy .
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