Nowadays,
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is
aChange the article
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first
step toward
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young and mature
personsReplace the word
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to take chance in their social
life
as well as in their personal
life
.
Moreover
, some
opposed that idea ۔While most of them agreed with
this
argument .
iChange the capitalization
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will discuss both advantages and
drawbackFix the agreement mistake
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of
this
statement .
To start with advantages , chances are very beneficiary for adults at
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stage .To illustrate , possibility in student
life
like when they pass matric
then
they choose desired subjects for
further
study .
Secondly
, aim
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support healthy
life
but they
also
contribute
manyChange preposition
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threats .
in addition
to that ,
life
without
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is like you
goWrong verb form
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onChange preposition
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destinationCorrect article usage
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without
knowWrong verb form
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theirCorrect pronoun usage
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paths . Goals
are playChange the verb form
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a sufficient role in social
life
, because of hard work and
possibiltyCorrect article usage
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they turn their dreams into reality
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and became
in
life
.
For instance
, steve jobs invest all of his money in
iphoneCorrect article usage
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project .
Then
, after day and night work he and his colleagues became victorious
toChange preposition
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devices for
.Nowadays ,
iphoneCorrect article usage
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is big fish and they launched new smartphones after every year .
similarly
,
put
lifeCorrect pronoun usage
their life
his life
her life
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endangerWrong verb form
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when he
leaveChange the verb form
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the Correct article usage
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school and he
manufactureChange the verb form
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a
microsoftChange the capitalization
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.
To outweigh
drawbacksCorrect article usage
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,
possibilityCorrect article usage
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inChange preposition
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life
may cause
loss , failures etc .Chances have many negative impacts
inChange preposition
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daily
life
. At
startAdd an article
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,
goalAdd an article
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is a crucial for every probability .That,s why , when a goal is not set
then
nearly you cost your finance and
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. Many companies lead
failure because they have immature
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employesCorrect your spelling
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and
also
use their wealth
inChange preposition
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impossible projects . In personal
life
, when a student
eagerAdd a missing verb
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to run a
after leaving
the Correct article usage
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school
then
they might fail in future because they no experienced about environment and calculation of a firm .
For Instance
, teenagers invest all of
hisCorrect pronoun usage
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money in
a Correct article usage
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Bitcoin in 2014 . they get profit
inChange preposition
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this
coin and they became
addictWrong verb form
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then
, suddenly Bitcoin crashed in 2015 that why they
leadWrong verb form
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towardChange preposition
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loss and hazard
ofChange preposition
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life
. According to
reportCorrect article usage
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published by the "Express" about 10 %
adultsChange preposition
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suicide because of their failure due to chances
In conclusion , probability lead toward success by
hard work and desired goal .
, aim plays a good role when a teenager became prosperous .On contrary , experience is the only thing that matter in social
life
then
you
economic loss and fail in future .