Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/She would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter -describe where you lived when you were a student at the university -recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation -warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation

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Dear Javid I am writing to suggest some solutions to your housing problems that I had faced before. I used to inhabit a suburb that was within walking distance of my university.

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accommodation was recommended by a close friend of mine who had studied and stayed there.All facilities were located in my neighbourhood.

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, the transport system was convenient even though I think it has developed more compared to before. I would like to help you in order to find a suitable place to live in.Keep in touch with your group mates because they may give you relevant suggestions or you can apply for council housing.They offer reasonable prices houses.The best thing about houses which are rented by council housing is that they are situated near the university There are several landlords who are more likely to deceive overseas students.Try to avoid these kinds of people.

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,I would like to inform you that state agents will offer residences

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most of them are costly and empty.You have to purchase new furniture and equipment. Sincerely Maik Maliki

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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7 paragraphs

174 words

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