It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?
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Thus
it is crucial for everyone to take risks whether in their professional or personal life
. In this
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a risk
the risk
risk
and illustrate how the advantages overcome the advantages as well.
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Advanturousness
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Adventurousness
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its negative as we can not always predict the consequences. Change the verb form
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This
is because there are many factors that affect the Correct your spelling
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financial
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For example
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In contrast
, employees in such
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Furthermore
, they might quit their jobs seeking for
other companies. To overcome these problems people need to reduce their audacity while making their decisions.
According to my own review, I believe that choices we made with courage often bring unexpected benefits to us. Due to the fact that unusual success comes out of a brave person. Change preposition
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For instance
, my brother decided that he want to start his profession
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14-year-old
in addition
to leaving his academic career. As a result
, he now owns his workshop and he is only 20 years old. However
, if he did not follow his ambition, he would achieve none. This
is why I strongly recommend risk
takers to
unleash their imagination and follow their instinct.
In conclusion, taking adventures could improve your Fix the infinitive
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life
in unexpected ways or maybe ruin your life
. But I reckon that life
is meaningless without risk
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