It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

It is undeniable that taking
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has a great impact
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people's lives.
Thus
it is crucial for everyone to take risks whether in their professional or personal
life
. In
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I am going to discuss both cons and pros of taking
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and illustrate how the advantages overcome the advantages as well.
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its negative as we can not always predict the consequences.
This
is because there are many factors that affect the
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final
financial
finanl
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results.
For example
, businessmen who invest their money in a major project without
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plan could
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into
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crisis.
In contrast
, employees in
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similar
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will not suffer from the same
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.
Furthermore
, they might quit their jobs seeking
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other companies. To overcome these problems people need to reduce their audacity while making their decisions. According to my own review, I believe that choices we made with courage often bring unexpected benefits to us. Due to the fact that unusual success comes out of a brave person.
For instance
, my brother decided that he want to start his
profession
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life
when he was only a
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boy
in addition
to leaving his academic career.
As a result
, he now owns his workshop and he is only 20 years old.
However
, if he did not follow his ambition, he would achieve none.
This
is why I strongly recommend
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unleash their imagination and follow their instinct. In conclusion, taking adventures could improve your
life
in unexpected ways or maybe ruin your
life
. But I reckon that
life
is meaningless without
risk
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Opportunities
  • Growth
  • Innovation
  • Challenges
  • Self-discovery
  • Resilience
  • Uncertainty
  • Consequences
  • Calculated risks
  • Stagnation
  • Regret
  • Comfort zone
  • Entrepreneurship
  • Adventurous spirit
  • Thriving
  • Failure
  • Mitigate
  • Reap the rewards
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