You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorect. write a letter to the editor of the magazin. In your letter correct the information in the article explan why it is important for the magazin to give correct information suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter about the article published about Chandigarh city in the Newyork Travels. I want to inform you that some of the information mentioned in the article is incorrect and misleading and should be corrected.
Firstly
, the article says that the city was
initially
designed by a Swiss architect, John Miller.
However
, it is not true; Michael Lee, a Frenchman,
first
developed the town.
In addition
, another point, which is highlighted incorrectly, which would surely hurt many people, is that the city was inaugurated by the British. Still, the truth is it was done by the Indian
first
prime minister Mr Jawahar Lal Nehru. I authenticated the info from the national historical book as well. I think you must correct the blog because it
affect
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people's sentiments.
Also
, I would appreciate it if you do not publish anything without proper data as it sometimes misleads the world. Your magazines are so popular that many people around the world read them. Please let me know if you need more details. Yours faithfully, Ishant Kesar
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • incorrect information
  • misleading
  • rectify
  • significance
  • credibility
  • fact-based
  • accurate depiction
  • reliable sources
  • misinformation
  • influence public perception
  • tourist attraction
  • reputation
  • publish a correction
  • conduct research
  • consult local experts
  • accurate representation
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