Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe that parents of

children

going to private schools should not pay

taxes

as they do not attend public schools. I disagree with

this

concept and will discuss

about

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Taxes

paid by the

families

of the student usually supports the education system of the

state

. If particularly, private

school going

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families

are exempted from

this

category

then

some disadvantages may be evident.

Firstly

, it will be quite difficult for the

government

to calculate the amount of tax to be collected from

families

.

Secondly

, it might increase financial pressure upon the poor

families

who are not able to send their

childreb

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children

to private schools.

Thirdly

, welfare programs organised by the

government

for students are available for both public and private

school going

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children

,

hence

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any of the

group

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would be

injustice

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. The

government

collects

tax

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taxes

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for the development of its

state

. In my opinion, we shall happily contribute a minor amount for the benefit of society and

state

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. It is beneficial for

the

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all the individuals of the

state

to have a

well programmed

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educational system. The new generation should be provided with proper educational facilities to gear up the progress of the

state

. Paying

taxes

properly can help the

government

to provide education to those

children

who belong to

the

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families

living below the poverty rate. We must come forward to support

such

families

for the overall progress of our

state

. Overall , I believe

instead

of exempting

taxes

over

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the private

school going

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student's

family

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families

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, the

government

should release the burden of paying

tax

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taxes

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from the

families

living in poverty and should take appropriate steps to educate the

children

of those

families

.