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Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Some people believe that parents of
children
 going to private schools should not pay
taxes
 as they do not attend public schools. I disagree with
this
 concept and will discuss
about
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it in
this
 essay.
Taxes
 paid by the
families
 of the student usually supports the education system of the
state
. If particularly, private
school going
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families
 are exempted from
this
 category
then
 some disadvantages may be evident.
Firstly
 , it will be quite difficult for the
government
 to calculate the amount of tax to be collected from
families
.
Secondly
, it might increase financial pressure upon the poor
families
 who are not able to send their
childreb
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children
 to private schools.
Thirdly
 , welfare programs organised by the
government
 for students are available for both public and private
school going
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children
 ,
hence
abandoned
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 any of the
group
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 would be
injustice
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. The
government
 collects
tax
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taxes
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 for the development of its
state
. In my opinion, we shall happily contribute a minor amount for the benefit of society and
state
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the state
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. It is beneficial for
the
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all the individuals of the
state
 to have a
well programmed
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 educational system. The new generation should be provided with proper educational facilities to gear up the progress of the
state
 . Paying
taxes
 properly can help the
government
 to provide education to those
children
 who belong to
the
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families
 living below the poverty rate. We must come forward to support
such
families
 for the overall progress of our
state
. Overall , I believe
instead
 of exempting
taxes
over
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 the private
school going
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 student's
family
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families
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, the
government
 should release the burden of paying
tax
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taxes
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 from the
families
 living in poverty and should take appropriate steps to educate the
children
 of those
families
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • tax exemption
  • public education
  • private schools
  • collective responsibility
  • societal welfare
  • equitable access
  • financial burden
  • social cohesion
  • tax credits
  • vouchers
  • subsidies
  • state-funded
  • socioeconomic disparities
  • public vs. private sector
  • quality of education
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