You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sam, I hope
this
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letter of mine finds you in good health and in high spirits. I am glad you are planning to go on a camping trip to Manali to relieve yourself from the scorching Delhi heat.
Moreover
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, I am pessimist that your journey as well stays there will be wonderful because they have now made specific places with all basic amenities available to newcomers so that you do not struggle if you have missed any equipment at home.
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, there may be some drawbacks to going on camping. There was a recent thunderstorm in Manali and many of the tourists were struck in the traffic for days without supplies.
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, even on reaching their destination, they were not allowed to camp because landslides could occur at any time. I was wondering if I could join you
this
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time as I have my summer holidays and I
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have an abundance of experience of camping so I will be an asset for your trip. I can
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arrange the bookings and buy crucial necessities for the journey. Hope to see you soon. Your Friend, Taran
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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