Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

There is no doubt that

smartphones

have an essential role in our life nowadays, but the thing that calls for attention is the time spent using mobile

phones

each day by children. In

this

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I will discuss its cons and pros and clarify how dangerous could be the

phones

. In recent years,

smartphones

invaded the whole world and provided multiple paths to access

to

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information that can help young people to learn in a more productive manner as well as entertain them.

In addition

to the

last

pros, minors communicate with each other through their mobile

phones

especially

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during holidays.

However

, if pupils were forbidden to use these advanced methods in response to meet their needs, they would suffer from

lack

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of knowledge which could affect their development.

By contrast

, using

smartphones

for too many hours per day might damage children's cognitive skills and health problems

such

as vision, neck pain or headache.

In other words

, utilizing

smartphones

for a long time can affect minors'

lifestyle

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,

for instance

, activities like planning football or visiting friends and family would be less Important as they do not have much time left. To solve

this

issue parents should restrict all distractions that maybe harm their children by encouraging them to establish

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a healthy

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well- balanced

lifestyle

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like playing sports, reading books, and learning a new language. In short, I believe that mobile

phones

were invented to help people of all ages in different ways and make their life easier not to dominate their minds.