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taking a lot of time to make an important decision is often viewed as a bad quality for a person to have, but in fact, it is a good quality for a person to have

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People
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 are faced with
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a dilemma
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dilemma
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dilemmas
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 more frequently today, and they have to make important
decisions
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 for themselves,
families
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their families
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 and
children
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their children
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. Under these circumstances, some will devote
time
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 and energy into
consideration
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, while others will
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easily
has
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decision
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. These different
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 are closely related to
features
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the features
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 and qualities of
people
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. From my perspective, thorough
consideration
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 will be considered as a better
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option
.
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 with, being thoughtful before making important
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 represents
reliability
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the reliability
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 of a person. A reliable person will consider all the
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possible
possbile
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possible
 outcomes and
uncertanties
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uncertainties
 in advance, which requires sufficient
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commitment
commitement
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commitment
. Reliability is considered
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one of the
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 of decent
people
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. To illustrate, my brother was offered a job in the local government after graduation from college. He took several days
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consideration
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 and thought thoroughly about his future career before he
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accepting
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 the offer. It turned out that he excelled in his job and got promoted afterwards. The reason for his success lies in that he is
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 a reliable person and he is always very
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careful
carefull
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careful
 in making
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decision
decisions
deicison
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decisions
 during work and in daily life.
People
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 who contribute thorough
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 before major
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decision
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decisions
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 are considered
as
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reliable ones.
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, contributing
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 to making important
decisions
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 can more likely avoid negative consequences,
thus
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 enabling
people
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 to succeed. It is not a waste of
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 to consider for a relatively long
time
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 before making major
decisions
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, including future
career
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careers
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,
offsprings
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 and families.
Such
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decisions
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 require
contribution
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the contribution
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 of
time
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 and energy. Only when
people
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 consider the
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possibilities
possibilites
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possibilities
, both the pros and cons of the issue can they reach
to
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a wise
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.
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, I considered for several months when I choose my university major. I consulted
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vocational
voational
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a voational
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 tutor in the school and
also
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 shadowed
people
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 working in the profession. After spending months in research, I
finally
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 chose the major
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 interests me most. I think the career path I chose is a rewarding one, and I enjoy my daily work greatly. In conclusion, devoting sufficient
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 into
consideration
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 before making an important
decision
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 can be considered
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a good quality for
people
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 to have. With
this
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 feature, they are more likely to become successful and be considered
as
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a
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thoughtful and reliable
people
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.

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