Describe your most satisfying team experience, so far, in your life. What it will be cause?

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team
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high- school period. It was a group which constitutes some sort of mentally high and medium powerful members.
In addition
, our
team
’s performance seems to be quite fabulous due to the fact that every representative defers each other’s response
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the instructor’s question and eventually we come to the conclusion. I have an inordinate pile of
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to the
team
by giving true inputs to the majority of questions. The mysterious point behind the scenario proves to be that our
team
is really satisfactory because we have explicit goals. To be succinct, our
team
’s goal seems to be the same which is getting excel others by achieving the expected point.
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, the important thing I am frightening
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this
semester appears to be having a
team
member who literally disregards
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the project. I hope I will not only crack to motivate our
team
members
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but
also
accomplish the task undertaken by myself corresponding to the task achievement.
For example
, if a
team
member has a question with regard to
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specific task, he or she can feel free to ask it through our WhatsApp group. As a
team
member, I will try to circumvent
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of conversation which drags the
team
into
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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