Your friend's dog has recently passed away. Write a letter to console your friend. In your letter: Express your sympathy Include memories you have about the dog Invite your friend to do something with you.

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Dear John, I hope you are doing well! I just heard about your dog Jimmy who passed away

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week. My deepest condolences are with you and your whole family. I can understand that he is your family member and it is very hard to forget him. I

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have a lot of memories with him since my childhood. I and you used to play with him after coming back from school. We play hide and seek with him and it was really fun those days. I used to give him my biscuits to eat.

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, I still remember how he followed our commands like, sit, stand, no, that was incredible. May his soul rest in peace. I really want you and your family to be strong at

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moment and if possible I would like you to come to my place to change your mind. We'll play cricket

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Sunday, I hope you find time to come. Looking forward to seeing you. All the best. Regards Shikha

Submitted by shikha_dhingra on Sat Sep 24 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

168 words

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