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Parents are the best teachers. Do you agree or disagree?

#parents #teachers
Some people believe that
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 the mother and father are the greatest pedagogues and I definitely agree with
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essay I will discuss
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 viewpoint in a depth. There is no secret that
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 almost all of the things which we did not know a learned from our lovely
parents
. They are always ready to give essential advice whenever. If we look back, we can see that almost everything we have achieved is due to our dads or moms.
For example
, from an early age, when we did not even know how to count correctly, they taught us to do
this
, taught us how to speak, how to eat, how to walk, and so far we face problems and at that time we try to ask for help
first
 of all from our
parents
.
Parents
 did not leave their children alone at any time and even if they will leave our life in the future they will not do it because it is too difficult to go away from a lovely person for a long time.They are always with them in the form of blessings and
also
 provide guidance to achieve success in our life. we still have
parents
,
then
 from now on we must protect them even more, but if we have already lost them,
then
 read them and remember To conclude,
parents
 are always concerned as the
first
 educators. They are the ones who give everything for us to become a better person.
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