A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/She has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, •give details of the course you took at the university •explain why you recommend the university •give some advice about how to apply
Hi Jane,
It is good to hear from you after some time, hope you have been keeping well.
In regards to your query on the Physics class that I did at University, it was a one-year course that consisted of both theory and practical modules. The subject covers from the fundamentals which we learnt at school up to the level which the campus provides for
this
course. I very much loved the practical aspect of the subject since it gave me the chance to put the theory into practice.
The university, although
mostly famous for engineering studies, is also
one of the best institutions for this
specific field. The lecturer panel who conducts the classes are of high calibre, and one teacher in particular
, Mr David has also
been nominated for the Nobel Prize in Physics this
year.
If you would like to get more information and also
apply for this
course, you could do two things. Firstly
, visit the university website, search for the subject, and apply through the portal itself. Secondly
, visit the campus office personally and meet one of the student advisors who would be able to help you apply.
I hope that I was able to help you out with this
information, and if there are any more questions that you need me to answer, just let me know.
Best Regards,
JamesSubmitted by kanishka.wimalasuriya on
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Task Achievement
To enhance your writing, consider adding more personalized and specific examples about your own experiences with the course to vividly illustrate its benefits. While the current details and recommendations are very helpful, sharing personal success stories or memorable projects could make your advice even more compelling and relatable.
Coherence & Cohesion
For further improving coherence and cohesion, try to link your ideas more explicitly. For instance, when transitioning from describing the course to recommending the university, a connecting sentence could smooth the flow. Also, varying your sentence structures more could enhance the readability and engagement of your letter.
Coherence & Cohesion
You've done an excellent job in organizing your letter, using clear paragraphs for each main idea.
Task Achievement
The tone of your letter is admirably suited to the context, being both supportive and informative, which is perfect for advising a friend.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite