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Parent are the best teachers. Do you agree or disagree

#parent #teachers
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Many people think only professors can improve the quality of education,
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 sometimes teach betta than teachers. I completely agree that
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 are the best teachers in the world because they put the foundation and moral value
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 children’s life. On the one
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 are the basis of human life.
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 of the most important things a parent can teach their baby is to talk. When close relatives or family members talk to each other,
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 conversation affects the baby.
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 it is
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 how to friends around him when he goes to school for the
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 because
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 teach people how to behave in
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. If a child goes to school for the
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 time without
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 to anyone, he won’t make friends so
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 teach him to talk . On other
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 we have
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 values that teachers cannot explain. In
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 academy can’t provide a complete education in the proper sense of the word
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 for moral and life
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. We study maths, physics, history and so on in our textbooks but it doesn’t teach us the values we need to do or learn. And our
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 teach us each of them , give us
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 advise throughout our lives and stay with us in
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 situation. Pedagogues are an exception. In a nutshell,
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 and
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 are without a doubt the best teacher that every person have.
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Them
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the
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 gives everything for us to become a better person.
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