Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett, In your letter Suggest how you could help her in her home Say why you would like to do this work Explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear Mrs Barrett, I am writing to express my enthusiasm to join a position that you have advertised to help you in your

house

as a part-time housekeeper.

To begin

with, there are many reasons why I would like to choose

this

job.

Firstly

, I have studied lots of books about keeping

house

and I worked as a housekeeper for five years in an English-speaking family

house

Therefore

, I could help to manage your

house

to be tidy and clean.

Besides

, arranging the stuff in order is my passion and I can help to do that as well.

Moreover

, I graduated with a diploma course in English and I am able to communicate well with a native speaker if you are looking for someone who has a certification in English.

Therefore

, as above mentioned, I am of the view that

this

role suits me to work in your home.

Besides

, I am able to work anytime every weekend

although

I am not available to work on weekdays. Thanks in advance for your kind consideration. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Sincerely yours, Sandar Myint

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firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

186 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Domestic chores
Culinary skills
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