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computers are being used more and more in education. some people say that this a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. discuss both sides of the arguments and the give your own opinion.

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In the technology era, the use of
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 increasing tremendously in schools and colleges. In
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 is good for the nation. To embark, there is plenty of evidence to prove why
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 are good for
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. The mammoth conspicuous reason is the flexibility of
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 learning.
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 is a resilient platform, you do not need to follow the exact
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 structure you can
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 whenever you get
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, with the help of
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students
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 can not only
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 can gain knowledge in their leisure
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, After a covid
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 of coaching centres made their centres fully digitalized, now if
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 want to
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 from home they can join the classes from home with the help of apps and the internet and
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, we can say soaring of using
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 improves our school system. Yet, there is another side of the picture, Even though the soaring
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 plays an important role in
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 life,
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,
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 have some negative impact on them. With digitalization, a
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 parents complain that while their children
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 on
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 they spend a
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 of
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 chatting with their friends on social media and watching songs on youtube, they are scared that they might see irrelevant content on youtube.
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 distracts
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 more than physical
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 online a
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 of
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 watch bad videos. In fact, Google CEO Satya Nadella was
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 worried about the irrelevant content for his kid,
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, he made youtube kids. In conclusion, Even though
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 are making education more effective and
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 more productive,
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, it has some negative effects.
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