You are starting a new business and need to build a website. You have a friend who works for an IT company who you want to help you. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter • describe your new business • ask your friend to help you build the website • say how you will thank your friend for his/her help.

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Dear Mercy, I am so glad to let you know that, after making so many hardships,
finally
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I am going to start a new business of my own. I would like to request your help in building a website for my new venture. I am going to start an online fashion portal with all types of clothes for women, men and kids along with some accessories.
Moreover
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, I am partnering with some of the famous brands like H&Mand Calvin Kevin where I can list their items
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in my portal and get more profit.
In addition
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to that, I am tied up with some sponsors and got a good investment to start
this
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trade smoothly. For
this
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getting happened, I need your support to develop an eye-catching website displaying all the items and their details that customers can purchase online.
Also
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, it needs the functionality for tracking the delivery and making
an online payments
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online payments
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that it requires an option to enter the coupon codes to avail of discounts. I have seen many of the projects that you have worked on and I got the inspiration to collaborate with you. Please do not hesitate to quote based on the manpower required. I appreciate, it if you can provide me with a design and the document of requirements which I can confirm with my sponsors and pay you the advance at the earliest. I know you might be committed to a lot of other projects, but if you can assist me with
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,it will be a great help for the initial step to making my dream come true. Please let me know your availability to talk in detail. I hope we together can make
this
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a great success. Kind Regards, Maria
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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