You have planned to stduy in australia. You have sent a letter to a college, but you have not received a reply from the college. Write a letter to the college principle. In your letter you should give details og the course that you wished to do say why do you choose yo study study at the college say why you need the reply soon.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

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letter to you to enquire you about the admission criteria for overseas students. I have

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sent you a letter, but I did not get a reply from your officials. To embark with, I am interested in doing a master's in nursing. Because I have completed secular in my home country, I would say

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would be an appropriate course to pursue my career as a registered nurse. What is more, I choose

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college

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because

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is the world's 4th-grade

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and provides excellent options for students, all over the world. As I have told my brother, he was a great ex-student who graduated from your

college

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and he told me that professors are very devoted, loyal and faithful to their profession. As another university is offering me the same course, I would prefer your

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to pursue my

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education.

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, if I am not eligible for admission,

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I would not waste my one academic year,as their deadline is approaching. I would like to request to you please let me know at the earliest. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Karampal Kaur

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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194 words

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