You have planned to stduy in australia. You have sent a letter to a college, but you have not received a reply from the college. Write a letter to the college principle. In your letter you should give details og the course that you wished to do say why do you choose yo study study at the college say why you need the reply soon.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

letter to you to enquire you about the admission criteria for overseas students. I have

also

sent you a letter, but I did not get a reply from your officials. To embark with, I am interested in doing a master's in nursing. Because I have completed secular in my home country, I would say

this

would be an appropriate course to pursue my career as a registered nurse. What is more, I choose

this

college

because

this

is the world's 4th-grade

college

and provides excellent options for students, all over the world. As I have told my brother, he was a great ex-student who graduated from your

college

and he told me that professors are very devoted, loyal and faithful to their profession. As another university is offering me the same course, I would prefer your

college

to pursue my

further

education.

Therefore

, if I am not eligible for admission,

then

I would not waste my one academic year,as their deadline is approaching. I would like to request to you please let me know at the earliest. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Karampal Kaur

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