Education is a critical element of the prosperity of any nation. The more educated the people of the country are, more successful their becomes. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

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. for a
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to develop and grow it needs to
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. a wise man once said
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education is the fuel of minds. I strongly believe that learning is a must if we want to make a
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.if we look around we can see that most of the greatest world leaders had
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learning during the course of their life .it goes without saying that
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to detrimental effect and collapse of that particular
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.as it is the situation in many parts of
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,education makes
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things .these inventions
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lead to a strong sufficient
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were created
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spent days
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from
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place to another .these
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changed
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us a lot of time
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became a source of money for countries and provided a lot of jobs for
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. to conclude ,if a
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wants to develop it should pay
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meticulous
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attention
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education .
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