You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: • say why he/she would not enjoy going to college • explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her • suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her

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Dear Rana, how are you doing? I hope everything goes well after graduation. I received your letter a week ago seeking advice to get a job or go for higher studies.
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although
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attending a college program could be enjoyable, I reckon that you will not enjoy studying again Math and Science as you are not a big fan of them.
Secondly
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, I think it will be a waste of time if you make a higher-studies without securing your future with occupancy which will be beneficial for your practical life. as per my knowledge of your personality, I think you are passionate about fashion and following trends. And I saw that in your style of clothes and painting. I still remember the handmade jacket which you made for me on my birthday.
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, I recommend you to collect all your work
then
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start searching for all the fashion companies and I am sure you will get hired soon. Best regards, Reham
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Real-world experience
  • Practical experience
  • Financial independence
  • On-the-job training
  • Student loan debt
  • Personal growth
  • Professional networking
  • Career development
  • Skilled workers
  • Job market
  • Career goals
  • Immediate income
  • Professional relationships
  • Market demand
  • Defining interests
  • Educational investments
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