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Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do the environment? What can be done by government and individuals to solve this problem?

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In
this
 contemporary era,
use
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the use
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 of
plastic
 has
been
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increased day by day. People
thrown
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throw
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plastic
 in
garbage
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the garbage
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, lakes, and on the streets which
affect
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affects
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 the environment badly. In
this
 essay, the main causes along with
its
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their
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 remedies will be explained in the following subsequent paragraphs.
To begin
 with, when
the
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plastic
 bags,
plastic
 bottles and
plastic
 dishes are used and after that
leaved
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left
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 on the roads and rivers,
this
caused
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causes
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 air and water pollution.
Furthermore
, to avoid these circumstances the government should take different steps like
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the implementation
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implementation
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of
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laws regarding
to
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this
, whereas a person can limit the problem by decreasing the
use
 of
plastic
 accessories.
In addition
, if all brands and companies start to
use
 fabric bags
instead
 of
plastic
then
 it will be very helpful.
For instance
, these days, Kayseria and
nishat
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 delivered their articles in paper bags which are disposable.
Further
, many other outlets are
also
 adopting
this
 trend.
Moreover
, is
plastic
is
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good for health? I should say no
,
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 because when we
use
 hot meal in
plastic
 bowls or
use
 in
microwave
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the microwave
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 it
produce
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 toxic things which can affect the stomach. In conclusion, despite the actions taken by the government, everyone should play their own role.
Plastic
 causes many environmental issues and will ruin
nation
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the nation
a nation
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. So,
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • plastic pollution
  • wildlife
  • marine life
  • decompose
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • fossil fuels
  • waterways
  • flooding
  • soil
  • groundwater
  • government regulations
  • single-use plastics
  • eco-friendly alternatives
  • plastic consumption
  • recycle
  • dispose of
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