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The road in front of your house got damaged a long ago and nothing has been done about it. Write a letter to the municipal authority complaining about the damaged road. In your letter: · introduce yourself · explain the condition of the road and suggest what they should do

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Dear Sir, My name is Mike Rod. I am writing
this
 letter to complain regarding the damaged
road
 in front of my house near the forest park. I am working as a class teacher in a community school. I have been staying at
this
 place for the
last
 10 years. I would like to highlight that the
road
 condition was always good.
However
, after the heavy rainfall
last
 year, the condition is totally changed. Unfortunately, Around 400 meters portion of the
road
 is totally damaged which is exactly opposite to my own house. The speed breaker is no more. There are a number of pits within the circumstance which could lead to a tripping hazard for anyone or cause an accident. In view of the above, I would request to take some corrective actions. You may barricade the damaged portion of the
road
 and start preparing the new roadside area and divert the traffic to
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north avenue.
Although
 there is a time for the
next
 monsoon season, I would recommend completing the repair work on the
road
 on an urgent basis. I am looking forward to seeing some prompt action from you. Yours faithfully, Mike Rod,
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