Some people believe that social media sites, such as face book or twitter, have a negative impact on young people and their ability to form personal relationships. Others believe that these sites bring people together in a beneficial way. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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medias
are Correct your spelling
media
common
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a common
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for the community. The majority of Fix the agreement mistake
tools
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are
getting used to Change the verb form
is
spend
a lot of time on social Change the verb form
spending
medias
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media
such
as Twitter, Facebook etc. While ones
argue that social Correct pronoun usage
some
media
stop a community for
dating and constructing relationships others state that it Change preposition
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conversely
assists young people
to arrange personal relationships. In my opinion , social media
helps people
to build relationship
very easily and Fix the agreement mistake
relationships
reasons
for that are provided in Correct article usage
the reasons
this
essay as
below.
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Firstly
, social medias
show and include everyday lives and Correct your spelling
media
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activities
activites
of Correct your spelling
activities
ones
to others so it gives a great opportunity for getting personal information about Fix the agreement mistake
one
fellow
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the fellow
general
lifestyle of someone. Correct article usage
the general
For instance
, posting pictures in
social sites introduce to Change preposition
on
future
potential partner Add an article
a future
about
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to
his
or Correct pronoun usage
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her
interests and hobby so Correct pronoun usage
their
this
helps to know if people
have something in common or not. Moreover
, this
makes easier
to build Correct pronoun usage
it easier
relationship
and communication between lovers because having exact imagination about each other from social Fix the agreement mistake
relationships
medias
breaks any barrier between individuals.Questions which are not convenient to be asked and lack of time could prevent knowing each other thoroughly and quickly .So, facebooks and other social tools are Correct your spelling
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great
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a great
place
for Change the noun form
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the
dating.
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Next
, social websites can explore if a person is single or not. For instance
, if a man married
, he will definitely post his family's pictures and Add a missing verb
is married
also
his friends on his social pages are
one of Change the verb form
is
the
evidence Correct article usage
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about
his personal life. Change preposition
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In addition
to that , social media
is a mitigated
tool for Replace the word
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quick
chat in case if persons are extremely busy with their everyday activities and work.
In conclusion , social Add an article
a quick
media
is definitely getting popular nowadays. In my opinion , social media
have positive
impact Add an article
a positive
for
building Change preposition
on
relationship
because they don't disclose Add an article
a relationship
personal
lives of a person,gives information about Correct article usage
the personal
marriage
status and Replace the word
marital
and
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the
communication. If dating Correct article usage
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people
will communicate on social media
it will help them to faster knowing each other and start dating.Submitted by zhadym on
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