Your company has recently introduced a new work uniform. You are mostly happy with the uniform, but there is one thing that you do not like. Write a letter to your manager. In the letter say what you like about the uniform explain what you don’t you like about the uniform suggest how the uniform can be improved

Dear Robin, As you know,
this
week new uniforms took place in our company which is an excellent idea and now we have separate dresses and we look unique from all other company’s employees when we go for coffee and lunch in the canteen. I love
this
dress because of the colour chosen by the company. The blue colour is my favourite one as well as It’s very comfortable. But, the breadth of the dresses has some problems. Many employees
also
say that the medium capacity is incorrect because everyone who is wearing a medium amount dress feels really loose when they move around as well as the shirt is
also
loose to me. All I want is, please look into the amount of a medium dress.
This
volume is mixed with some large dresses. Importantly, the colour of the pent is excellent but if we match the white shirt along with
it
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will be fabulous. I look forward to hearing back from you. Yours faithfully, Inder.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • introduced
  • appreciation
  • pleasing
  • professional image
  • elegant
  • sophistication
  • professionalism
  • high quality
  • appearance
  • comfort
  • modern
  • stylish
  • tailored
  • sleek lines
  • polished
  • discomfort
  • relaxed
  • adjustable
  • beneficial
  • aesthetics
  • commitment
  • valued
  • enhance
  • modifications
  • impression
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