Some young people find school difficult and leave early without any qualifications. What causes this problem and what measures could help reduce it?

Most youth people encounter
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education
complicated and quit their
education
without obtaining a degree. The main cause of
this
phenomenon is using too much social
media
because they find several ways to make
money
easily, and the most viable solution is to control social
media
with stronger regulations on the data posted on websites.
Firstly
, many of these pre-teens decided to abandon their
education
because they can make a lot of
money
without attending a university, so they start uploading videos or pictures hoping they become viral, so they can be paid with a lot of
money
.
However
, not always
this
method work as
they
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expected and many of them end up losing time and their
education
.
As a result
, many of these students are jobless and uneducated because they were trapped by using online apps.
For instance
, in The United States, many
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students are quitting their
education
, and
instead
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they upload information about
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,
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tutorials, and funny videos. Some of them went viral, and they believe
this
method is the new way to become famous and affluent. The most viable solution is to control social
media
with strict regulations on what is
post
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posted
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and the intention of
this
information.
Moreover
, it should be stricter regulations on the information, and the veracity of
this
data to avoid confusion among
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younger
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youngers
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younger
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students who are easily influenced.
Also
, social
media
should avoid
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the amount of
money
a person is
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by uploading funny videos to avoid
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young people on
this
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these
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activities.
For instance
, In the country of China, in 2021, it
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by the
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government
governmet
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government
that a person who
upload
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uploads
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a video or an informative article must present a licence number as a professional or legal
penalties
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this
person should
face
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. In conclusion,
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is
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is
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frequent
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to
ot
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to
hear that young citizens are
unisnterested
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uninterested
interested
on
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in
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obtaining a degree
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because
becasue
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because
they find
too
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it too
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difficult to
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acquire
acquiere
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acquire
a license, and they find
easier
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an easier
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way
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ways
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to make
money
by using the variety of methods posted on a website.
This
can be prevented by
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controlling
controling
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controlling
websites and social
media
with high penalties on data uploaded that might negatively influence young generations.
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