The arts, including art, music and theatre are considered to be important in society. Do you think the arts still have a place amongst our modern lifestyles? Should the arts be included in school program?

There has been much discussion revolving around the issue of whether the

arts

,

such

as art, music and theatre are important nowadays among

people

. Some

people

assert that the

arts

have become a worthless part of society as

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technology has been rapidly advancing.

However

, some may believe that the

arts

are as significant as they have been before, or even more important nowadays. Personally, I am in favour of the latter view that the

arts

provide society with great benefits and they should even be included in

school

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. The primary factor that we need to take

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consideration is that the

arts

help

people

relax.

For instance

, playing, creating or listening to music makes one feel

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instant satisfaction, which can positively affect mood and thoughts.

In addition

, other forms of

arts

,

for example

, theatre and art, help one forget stressful thoughts and achieve a temporal state of peace of mind. All that reduces mental health challenges in our fast-paced society and makes

people

happier. The

second

benefit of the

arts

is that they help

people

with self-realisation. Dozens of young

people

struggle to find who they are,

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they like, and performing

arts

can solve these problems by immersing them in activities they enjoy.

That is

exactly why the

arts

should be included in

school

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: they help to find happiness from a young age, develop special skills that make a person unique and give

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chance to realise themselves not only academically, but

also

from

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arts

perspective. To sum up, the

arts

are important these days as a form of relaxation and mindfulness. These aspects are especially important in childhood, and

that is

why the

arts

should be taught

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schools. Not only do they reduce stress, but

also

boost students’ confidence by giving them a chance to realise themselves.