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The arts, including art, music and theatre are considered to be important in society. Do you think the arts still have a place amongst our modern lifestyles? Should the arts be included in school program?

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There has been much discussion revolving around the issue of whether the
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 as art, music and theatre are important nowadays among
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. Some
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 assert that the
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 have become a worthless part of society as
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technology has been rapidly advancing.
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, some may believe that the
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 are as significant as they have been before, or even more important nowadays. Personally, I am in favour of the latter view that the
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 provide society with great benefits and they should even be included in
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program
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. The primary factor that we need to take
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 consideration is that the
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 help
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 relax.
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, playing, creating or listening to music makes one feel
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instant satisfaction, which can positively affect mood and thoughts.
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, other forms of
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, theatre and art, help one forget stressful thoughts and achieve a temporal state of peace of mind. All that reduces mental health challenges in our fast-paced society and makes
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 happier. The
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 benefit of the
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 is that they help
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 with self-realisation. Dozens of young
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 struggle to find who they are,
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 they like, and performing
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 can solve these problems by immersing them in activities they enjoy.
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 exactly why the
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 should be included in
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program
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: they help to find happiness from a young age, develop special skills that make a person unique and give
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chance to realise themselves not only academically, but
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 from
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the perspective of the art
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 perspective. To sum up, the
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 are important these days as a form of relaxation and mindfulness. These aspects are especially important in childhood, and
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 why the
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 should be taught
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 schools. Not only do they reduce stress, but
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 boost students’ confidence by giving them a chance to realise themselves.
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