In the future all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles would be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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According to progress in technology, it is possible that in the future using

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vehicles will be a trend around the world.

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could have some disadvantages, I think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

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essay will mention both of benefits and drawbacks of

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issue. On the one hand,

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transportation modes have different advantages.

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, by driving

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have to spend a lot of

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commuting.

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, if a person does not have to drive, he/she could spend their

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doing other work.

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, I am a civil engineer, and my workplace is located out of town, so I should spend around one-hour driving every day.

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, if I use a

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car, I could save my

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and allocate that to my interests,

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as watching my favourite reality shows.

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people

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have different senses, so they probably are affected by some bad or good events.

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maybe makes them not pay attention enough to driving, and it causes accidents, while robots and automated vehicles do not have any senses, so they act constantly.

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, it helps to reduce the rate of accidents.

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, using automated cars makes some individuals feel stressed or nervous because they do not trust these kinds of transportation.

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it prevents them from using

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cars.

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last

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year I went to Dubai with my family, and you can find some taxis

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,but we did not use them because my mother was scared about using them.

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, companies should spend

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and cost to make

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technology friendly, and make

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comfortable with them. In conclusion, I think

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automobiles could be very useful, and help

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to save

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and reduce the chance of accidents

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some families probably avoid using them.

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, companies should work on that, and make them reliable for individuals.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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