Parents are the best teachers. Do you agree or disagree

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mother and father play a pivotal role in
children
’s development. Personally, I believe that the
first
priority of
parents
ought to be teaching their own
children
and I completely agree with
this
statement.
This
essay will argue and provide arguments on
this
statement. On the one hand,
parents
should take the
first
responsibility
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their
children
since it is the primary duty of
parents
to teach them to do and to construct the essential and initial things of life.
For example
, when someone
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a
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birth to a child, it becomes the
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initial
intial
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initial
responsibility of
parents
to teach their
children
to talk, walk, write and
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of necessary things that they
have
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to be aware of.
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Furthermore
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the initial education of young generations should be
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taught
thought
tought
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taught
by their
parents
.
On the other hand
, encouraging the
children
to learn education is
also
the main priority of public school teachers since teachers are
also
considered one of the major manner who leads young human beings to be educated and successful person in the future.
Moreover
, there are
also
other sources
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available
such
as social media for young mankind that can replace teachers as any kind of data that has to be
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taught
tough
thought
tought
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taught
to
children
is widely available on the internet.
For instance
,
majority
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of public schools in
UK
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has
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allowed their students to utilize the internet
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the purpose of getting
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knowledge
knowladge
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knowledge
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the aid of
the
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social media since it’s
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suitable and affordable way of learning. To
receptulate
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recapitulate
, having weighed everything mentioned up, I can come to a conclusion
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that despite the certain ways of getting educated by various sources,
parents
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to be
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the major aspect of constructing the young generation.
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